Cute. The animation obviously has its own style, which I like.
But something that I think needs more attention is your transitions. They're kind of awkward at certain points, both the animation and audio transitions. And by awkward, what I mean mostly is abrupt. Most specifically when he was traveling through time.
Not bad, though. Funny little idea. Keep it up.
This was great. Really hilarious, and the animation and voice acting are superb. Well done.
One thing, though, I'm not really an oversensitive person, but still I found the tumor-related gore a bit... gross. I didn't really think it was funny.
Other than that, it's fantastic. Good job.
I'm not even sure why I'm rating this so high. I think I've been hypnotized.
What the f--
FULL OF WIN
Not too shabby. And yet...
The art and animation was all great. The writing was fitting, although I think I caught at least one time where a rhyme was reused, which is probably fine with most people, but I think originality is always better. That being said, coming up with rhymes that always fit what you want to say is really difficult, and I think overall the poem was smashing. I can see a lot of work went into it.
And then the audio was my biggest issue. The narrator has a good voice for it, is obviously a good voice actor, but the sound quality could use some improvement. The recording was a little rough, and maybe it would've been good to bring out the lower tones in his voice to add to the atmosphere. And of course, bring up the music a LOT. I could barely hear it, and music is an incredibly important storytelling tool, in any situation.
I applaud your effort, keep it up.
Sorry, I'm a Motion Graphics/VFX artist so visuals are my strong Area. I do realise that the sound quality isn't as good as it could be, I do usually run it by a sound designer but the guy I usually talk to was busy and I didn't give him enough notice. Also the Flash Compression has taken away from the quality hence the YouTube link at the beginning.
The words that sound reused are delight and light...
Thanks for the review and stay tuned. There's more to come!
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